Post by Box of Rain on Dec 16, 2007 21:04:12 GMT -5
This is a futuristic, zombie-killin', sci-fi, thrilller, suspense, horror, later on romance kinda thing story. Please read and review if you wish.
The year is 3066, exactly 1000 years since the nuclear war that wiped the planet Earth out. No one has been to Earth since then; all surviving life forms moved to the other seven planets. The fate of those left on the planet was a gruesome one indeed. The people were left mutilated and transformed, close to tasting death, but the radiation wouldn’t allow the brain to stop working. The chemical reaction sopped all blood flow, heart beat, and organs, except for the brain. The brain kept the body working, however gruesome and mutilated it was. You couldn’t say they were alive; they were far from it. But they could move and function. Some say they could even still use machinery. No one is brave enough to go back to that godforsaken planet to find out…
On the planet Mars, the small village of Koatu lies in the province of Quextin. It was small and quaint village, looked down upon by many of the more upscale towns. The villagers were rejoicing, for it was the marking of Koatu’s most valued young woman’s eighteenth birthday, the day of which she swore to get her hunting license. A hunting license was a card that carried all of the carrier’s personal information in a simple barcode, including their social security number, date of birth, blood type, mother’s maiden name, and finger print. It enabled access to the carrier’s funds through a holographic bank teller. However, most importantly, it allowed the owner to buy weapons for the sole purpose of hunting. Be it hunting for monsters or bounties, no one wanted to undergo this dangerous career. Perhaps they valued their life more than the safety of others. Bravery was certainly a required virtue for this task.
Victoria Loire had bravery, or something close to it. She stood a good 5’8”, and was average in weight, though some considered her to be quite the Buxom Beauty. Her lustrous hair was long and curly in the back. They were loose, soft curls that didn’t require much maintenance. Her bangs were straight and parted on the left side of her head, and they fell just above her right eye. Her wild eyes were a striking honey-golden color and always seemed to have a psychotic glint to them. Her skin was slightly tanned from the constant sun, and it always warmer than most others due to her never-ceasing adrenaline rush. Her pearly white teeth glinted in beam of sun that shown through the saloon’s shuttered windows as she raised her glass of mead high in the air and shouted in celebration.
She drained her glass in seconds and slammed the mug down in earnest. A young man of about 16 was seated on the bar stool to the right of her. He had wild black spikes and bright blue eyes. He watched his life long best friend shyly.
“Now, now, Robbie! Don’t you give me that look. Today is my day, I get my hunting license! I’m going to end this plague of monsters that have been haunting the nights here in Koatu! HA HA HA! I’d like to see any monster try ‘n stop me. Don’t they know who I am? Victoria Loire’s the name!” Victoria guffawed, obviously under the influence of alcohol. Robert Ackerson looked down at the floor and sighed.
“You don’t even know who you are…,” he muttered. Victoria slapped him abruptly on the back, causing him to choke on his cream soda.
“No more rotten spirits! Today, we party! And tonight, I begin the extermination of filth that’s been ravaging the streets at night. Ain’t that right, Pops?” Victoria elbowed an elderly gentleman in the ribs sharply and he doubled over in pain.
“Sure thing, M-M-Miss Loire,” the balding man with glaucoma ridden eyes sputtered out. The afternoon continued with Victoria’s drunken antics, and those around her ducking, jumping, or just generally being annoyed. She was respected for getting her hunting license, but she was still notorious for her out of control, thrill-seeking behavior. Some people wondered why she didn’t find herself a nice young man and just settle down.
Sunset finally struck, and Robbie shook Victoria awake. It took a couple of swats and groans before she finally opened her eyes and sat up on the bar counter of Pops’ Saloon. Her blouse was unbuttoned enough to reveal a red, lacy see-through bra, and her skirt was torn up the side, showing the matching panties. Robbie should have been used to seeing her get like this, but he blushed regardless and felt his heart give a small twang of anguish. It killed him to see her this way.
“Oh shit, I need to get down to the licensing office, don’t I? Dammit, Robbie, why didn’t you wake me sooner?” she pouted and folded her arms across her chest. Robbie looked at the floor again.
“I did, but you were too drunk to notice,” he muttered sheepishly.
Victoria ruffled his hair, smiled, and said, “Hey don’t worry about it. Why don’t you accompany me down to the office so I don’t get all scared-like? After all, I am just a damsel in distress, aren’t I?” Robbie smiled back and looked at her.
“I don’t mind coming with you, but don’t you think you oughta change out of those clothes? Honestly, you look like common street candy,” he said with a light tone. Victoria playfully hit him on the arm.
“I reckon you’re right. It ain’t too proper for a young woman to walk ‘round town with her delicates showin’, now is it? It’s a good thing I did laundry the other day. You wait right here, young man, and don’t you dare peep while I change,” she said, jumping off of the counter and walking up the stairs to her room Pops always kept available for her. ‘Nothing is really left to the imagination, the way she’s dressed…’ Robbie thought.
Victoria came down fifteen minutes later, her hair and make-up fixed, and Robbie suspected she put in some eye drops to hide her bloodshot eyes. She was now wearing a white lacy corset, tied tight to accentuate her curves, a studded pyramid belt strewn across her hips, an empty gun holster, a long black leather skirt that flowed down to her ankles, and a pair of black platform knee-high boots. She walked up to Robbie and extended her arm.
“Shall we go, then?” she prompted, and he linked his arm nervously with hers at the crook of her elbow and they walked out the front door of Pops’ Saloon. The air was dry, and the ground was barren sand. Cacti sprung up for as far as the eye could see. Occasionally tumbleweeds would even roll by in the old-fashioned village of Koatu. The newly birthed night sky made everything seem more eerie, just like an authentic ghost town. Royal colors shadowed normally bright objects and life forms, and it was deadly still, except for the howling wind. Nevertheless, Victoria still had her devil-may-care grin intact.
“Beautiful night, eh?” she said as they walked south-bound. The licensing office was a good mile and a quarter down from the saloon. Robbie merely grunted.
“Don’t tell me you’re scared, b.o.y. Ain’t nothing to be afraid of out here. Not while I’m around, anyhow,” she said, too loudly for the time of night. Robbie tried to hush her.
“I am not afraid, Victoria. I’m just conscientious of the poor townsfolk trying to get some rest,” he said quietly.
“You are no fun,” she scoffed back. They continued on in silence, the only audible sounds being those of the howling wind battling the cries of the coyotes. Robbie broke the link of arms between them and rested his hands in his pockets. Victoria stretched hers behind her head. The air felt tense and heavy, like something was out of place. Robbie felt his heart drop to the pit of his stomach, and he was six feet tall, so that was no minor fall. Neither of them could help but feel aware of their surroundings. However, they reached the licensing office shortly thereafter, each of them still intact.
The young red-haired woman greeted them as they walked in. She appeared to be about to close for the night. Victoria and Robbie recognized her immediately as Jessie Bellinger, with her dark red hair and unmistakably emerald eyes. She smiled politely and stood up straight behind the counter.
“Ah, Miss Loire, I have been expecting you. I have your customs issued gun and card all ready for you. Not to sound too old-fashioned, but happy hunting! I appreciate you doing this for us,” her sweet voice rang out just like a bell chime, and the two of them couldn’t help but feel at ease as they listened to it. Victoria reached for her pistol and put it in the holster. She slipped her card away in her bosom.
“You have a good night now, you two,” she bowed as she bid them farewell.
“The same goes for you, Miss Bellinger. And thanks again!” Victoria said.
“Yes, please stay safe,” said Robbie.
Suddenly, something came hurdling through the wimpy glass window, shattering it to bits. Jessie screamed and ducked. Robbie looked alarmed and he and Victoria simultaneously twisted to face the site of the intrusion. They stared a gruesome mass of what appeared to be rotting flesh in the face, its hollow, blood red eyes scanning the room for its prey. It crawled more than walked, its long jagged nails scraping across the wooden floor, dragging its scarred and mangled greenish body with it. It moaned and cried an ungodly sound. Jessie screamed again and covered her ears. In a sickening manner, it twisted itself around like a serpent and began to crawl towards the scream. Victoria determined that its eyes did not work as well as its ears.
The shock had petrified Victoria where she stood, and she shook herself back to life, reaching for her newly acquired pistol. The putrid smell of the creature hit her like a ton of bricks. It smelled indescribable, like a dead rat that had sat out in the sun for days, festering with infection and maggots. She gagged, but quickly recovered. She had no time to waste; Jessie’s life was in danger. She fired off three shots, hitting the monster in the back of the head, the neck, and the back.
It hollered one of its blood-curdling screams, rotating its disfigured head to face the perpetrator. It rushed at her with impeccable speed. Robbie managed to find a bat and raised it high above his head, waiting for the foul beast to come close enough. It was only a mere inch away from mauling Victoria when Robbie brought the bat down like a war hammer, connecting with the mutant’s skull, causing a sickening CRACK to be heard. Jessie fainted from the gore of it all. The monster was bleeding and spewing fluids from its body. Victoria was about to jump up and cheer, when she was brought down with a hard THUD to the wooden floor. The creature had grabbed her ankle and was ripping though her boot to get to her flesh. It sunk its claws in, her skin spilling the warm, ruby liquid all over the floor. She was soon sitting in a pool of her own blood.
She fought the pain and spun the barrel of her silver handgun. She pointed it right between the eyes of the scourge that had wounded her. Her extended arm was shaking violently, and she began to feel sick. Regardless, she fired off the entire cartridge, the fifth bullet causing the monster to heap to the ground, bleeding black liquid, along with an assortment of others. Victoria cast a smug smile before passing out entirely…
Chapter One: Dawn
The year is 3066, exactly 1000 years since the nuclear war that wiped the planet Earth out. No one has been to Earth since then; all surviving life forms moved to the other seven planets. The fate of those left on the planet was a gruesome one indeed. The people were left mutilated and transformed, close to tasting death, but the radiation wouldn’t allow the brain to stop working. The chemical reaction sopped all blood flow, heart beat, and organs, except for the brain. The brain kept the body working, however gruesome and mutilated it was. You couldn’t say they were alive; they were far from it. But they could move and function. Some say they could even still use machinery. No one is brave enough to go back to that godforsaken planet to find out…
On the planet Mars, the small village of Koatu lies in the province of Quextin. It was small and quaint village, looked down upon by many of the more upscale towns. The villagers were rejoicing, for it was the marking of Koatu’s most valued young woman’s eighteenth birthday, the day of which she swore to get her hunting license. A hunting license was a card that carried all of the carrier’s personal information in a simple barcode, including their social security number, date of birth, blood type, mother’s maiden name, and finger print. It enabled access to the carrier’s funds through a holographic bank teller. However, most importantly, it allowed the owner to buy weapons for the sole purpose of hunting. Be it hunting for monsters or bounties, no one wanted to undergo this dangerous career. Perhaps they valued their life more than the safety of others. Bravery was certainly a required virtue for this task.
Victoria Loire had bravery, or something close to it. She stood a good 5’8”, and was average in weight, though some considered her to be quite the Buxom Beauty. Her lustrous hair was long and curly in the back. They were loose, soft curls that didn’t require much maintenance. Her bangs were straight and parted on the left side of her head, and they fell just above her right eye. Her wild eyes were a striking honey-golden color and always seemed to have a psychotic glint to them. Her skin was slightly tanned from the constant sun, and it always warmer than most others due to her never-ceasing adrenaline rush. Her pearly white teeth glinted in beam of sun that shown through the saloon’s shuttered windows as she raised her glass of mead high in the air and shouted in celebration.
She drained her glass in seconds and slammed the mug down in earnest. A young man of about 16 was seated on the bar stool to the right of her. He had wild black spikes and bright blue eyes. He watched his life long best friend shyly.
“Now, now, Robbie! Don’t you give me that look. Today is my day, I get my hunting license! I’m going to end this plague of monsters that have been haunting the nights here in Koatu! HA HA HA! I’d like to see any monster try ‘n stop me. Don’t they know who I am? Victoria Loire’s the name!” Victoria guffawed, obviously under the influence of alcohol. Robert Ackerson looked down at the floor and sighed.
“You don’t even know who you are…,” he muttered. Victoria slapped him abruptly on the back, causing him to choke on his cream soda.
“No more rotten spirits! Today, we party! And tonight, I begin the extermination of filth that’s been ravaging the streets at night. Ain’t that right, Pops?” Victoria elbowed an elderly gentleman in the ribs sharply and he doubled over in pain.
“Sure thing, M-M-Miss Loire,” the balding man with glaucoma ridden eyes sputtered out. The afternoon continued with Victoria’s drunken antics, and those around her ducking, jumping, or just generally being annoyed. She was respected for getting her hunting license, but she was still notorious for her out of control, thrill-seeking behavior. Some people wondered why she didn’t find herself a nice young man and just settle down.
Sunset finally struck, and Robbie shook Victoria awake. It took a couple of swats and groans before she finally opened her eyes and sat up on the bar counter of Pops’ Saloon. Her blouse was unbuttoned enough to reveal a red, lacy see-through bra, and her skirt was torn up the side, showing the matching panties. Robbie should have been used to seeing her get like this, but he blushed regardless and felt his heart give a small twang of anguish. It killed him to see her this way.
“Oh shit, I need to get down to the licensing office, don’t I? Dammit, Robbie, why didn’t you wake me sooner?” she pouted and folded her arms across her chest. Robbie looked at the floor again.
“I did, but you were too drunk to notice,” he muttered sheepishly.
Victoria ruffled his hair, smiled, and said, “Hey don’t worry about it. Why don’t you accompany me down to the office so I don’t get all scared-like? After all, I am just a damsel in distress, aren’t I?” Robbie smiled back and looked at her.
“I don’t mind coming with you, but don’t you think you oughta change out of those clothes? Honestly, you look like common street candy,” he said with a light tone. Victoria playfully hit him on the arm.
“I reckon you’re right. It ain’t too proper for a young woman to walk ‘round town with her delicates showin’, now is it? It’s a good thing I did laundry the other day. You wait right here, young man, and don’t you dare peep while I change,” she said, jumping off of the counter and walking up the stairs to her room Pops always kept available for her. ‘Nothing is really left to the imagination, the way she’s dressed…’ Robbie thought.
Victoria came down fifteen minutes later, her hair and make-up fixed, and Robbie suspected she put in some eye drops to hide her bloodshot eyes. She was now wearing a white lacy corset, tied tight to accentuate her curves, a studded pyramid belt strewn across her hips, an empty gun holster, a long black leather skirt that flowed down to her ankles, and a pair of black platform knee-high boots. She walked up to Robbie and extended her arm.
“Shall we go, then?” she prompted, and he linked his arm nervously with hers at the crook of her elbow and they walked out the front door of Pops’ Saloon. The air was dry, and the ground was barren sand. Cacti sprung up for as far as the eye could see. Occasionally tumbleweeds would even roll by in the old-fashioned village of Koatu. The newly birthed night sky made everything seem more eerie, just like an authentic ghost town. Royal colors shadowed normally bright objects and life forms, and it was deadly still, except for the howling wind. Nevertheless, Victoria still had her devil-may-care grin intact.
“Beautiful night, eh?” she said as they walked south-bound. The licensing office was a good mile and a quarter down from the saloon. Robbie merely grunted.
“Don’t tell me you’re scared, b.o.y. Ain’t nothing to be afraid of out here. Not while I’m around, anyhow,” she said, too loudly for the time of night. Robbie tried to hush her.
“I am not afraid, Victoria. I’m just conscientious of the poor townsfolk trying to get some rest,” he said quietly.
“You are no fun,” she scoffed back. They continued on in silence, the only audible sounds being those of the howling wind battling the cries of the coyotes. Robbie broke the link of arms between them and rested his hands in his pockets. Victoria stretched hers behind her head. The air felt tense and heavy, like something was out of place. Robbie felt his heart drop to the pit of his stomach, and he was six feet tall, so that was no minor fall. Neither of them could help but feel aware of their surroundings. However, they reached the licensing office shortly thereafter, each of them still intact.
The young red-haired woman greeted them as they walked in. She appeared to be about to close for the night. Victoria and Robbie recognized her immediately as Jessie Bellinger, with her dark red hair and unmistakably emerald eyes. She smiled politely and stood up straight behind the counter.
“Ah, Miss Loire, I have been expecting you. I have your customs issued gun and card all ready for you. Not to sound too old-fashioned, but happy hunting! I appreciate you doing this for us,” her sweet voice rang out just like a bell chime, and the two of them couldn’t help but feel at ease as they listened to it. Victoria reached for her pistol and put it in the holster. She slipped her card away in her bosom.
“You have a good night now, you two,” she bowed as she bid them farewell.
“The same goes for you, Miss Bellinger. And thanks again!” Victoria said.
“Yes, please stay safe,” said Robbie.
Suddenly, something came hurdling through the wimpy glass window, shattering it to bits. Jessie screamed and ducked. Robbie looked alarmed and he and Victoria simultaneously twisted to face the site of the intrusion. They stared a gruesome mass of what appeared to be rotting flesh in the face, its hollow, blood red eyes scanning the room for its prey. It crawled more than walked, its long jagged nails scraping across the wooden floor, dragging its scarred and mangled greenish body with it. It moaned and cried an ungodly sound. Jessie screamed again and covered her ears. In a sickening manner, it twisted itself around like a serpent and began to crawl towards the scream. Victoria determined that its eyes did not work as well as its ears.
The shock had petrified Victoria where she stood, and she shook herself back to life, reaching for her newly acquired pistol. The putrid smell of the creature hit her like a ton of bricks. It smelled indescribable, like a dead rat that had sat out in the sun for days, festering with infection and maggots. She gagged, but quickly recovered. She had no time to waste; Jessie’s life was in danger. She fired off three shots, hitting the monster in the back of the head, the neck, and the back.
It hollered one of its blood-curdling screams, rotating its disfigured head to face the perpetrator. It rushed at her with impeccable speed. Robbie managed to find a bat and raised it high above his head, waiting for the foul beast to come close enough. It was only a mere inch away from mauling Victoria when Robbie brought the bat down like a war hammer, connecting with the mutant’s skull, causing a sickening CRACK to be heard. Jessie fainted from the gore of it all. The monster was bleeding and spewing fluids from its body. Victoria was about to jump up and cheer, when she was brought down with a hard THUD to the wooden floor. The creature had grabbed her ankle and was ripping though her boot to get to her flesh. It sunk its claws in, her skin spilling the warm, ruby liquid all over the floor. She was soon sitting in a pool of her own blood.
She fought the pain and spun the barrel of her silver handgun. She pointed it right between the eyes of the scourge that had wounded her. Her extended arm was shaking violently, and she began to feel sick. Regardless, she fired off the entire cartridge, the fifth bullet causing the monster to heap to the ground, bleeding black liquid, along with an assortment of others. Victoria cast a smug smile before passing out entirely…